You Can Make It Up: Grand Theft Auto Jail

Gabe loves fan fiction. You Can Make It Up features his own personal alternate adventures starring some of our favorite characters.

The cinderblock walls were painted in a light, medicinal green. Everything was low-key, and sickly. Niko Bellic gripped the bars to his cell and stared out into the middle distance. He thought of his native Serbia. The atrocities that he witnessed there were like a sun-dappled tour of Outlook Park in a stolen 2008 Lexus ES with the driver's side window smashed in by a brick to let in the breeze compared to just one day in the Liberty City Penitentiary's laundry room.

On his first day in prison, in the cafeteria, Niko decided to pick the toughest, meanest looking con he could find, and beat the shit out of him to establish dominance. But his punching was so slow due to poor gaming function that even by repeatedly hitting b and sometimes y for an alternate attack, he still ended up in the infirmary for two weeks. And after that, he was marked as an easy target. He got raped all the time. Even now, standing at the bars to his cell, reflecting on the path that got him here, even in this quiet moment of despair, someone was raping his asshole.

It turns out that as bad as getting caught stealing cars all the time and running over thousands—literally thousands—of pedestrians, and shooting prostitutes in the face, and smuggling drugs, and evading arrest can be for the common criminal, the punishments for an undocumented foreigner just off the boat are much more severe. And with the Union of States's tense attitude towards immigration in the face of post-8/10 terrorist threats, his state appointed lawyer anticipated having the full weight of the Citizen Act thrown at them. Niko could end up in Guntimono Cove.

Whoever was raping him finished. Niko sighed and watched a guard crossing on the opposite walkway, his nightstick rattling aggressively against the bars. Niko thought of his mother back home, of the open road, of freedom, and that was all he had time for before someone new began to rape him from behind.

Posted by Gabe at 3:49 PM in Video Games, You Can Make It Up
Tags: Fan Fiction | Grand Theft Auto IV | Liberty City | Niko Bellic | Prison

2 Comments

man, that's fucked up.

Posted by: Matthew at 05/01/08 4:10 PM | Reply
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Honestly though, why is the punching so slow? It takes hours to beat up a prostitute. (Insert lame premature ejaculation joke here.)

Posted by: Peter at 05/02/08 10:49 AM | Reply
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